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=> General Discussions => Topic started by: blubber230 on February 08, 2014, 05:22:34 pm
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this is the 3 application I have posted because i think that i would make a grate helper because i stop problems or tell a staff member about it so that we can fix the problem.
i also think that i would make a good helper because i am very nice to people unless they bother me.
reason three i don't use foul language for any reason at all because i think its wrong to use foul language unless you need to for some apparent reason that's you're business
the four and final reason i think would make a great helper is because anyone that needs help i would gladly help on short notice even if i am busy doing something for myself i will stop and do something that is requested by another person
and i hope that this is enough for you guys to understand that i would like to be a helper and i know that i would make a good helper and thanks for taking time out of you're day for reading this application
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It always helps to have a common understanding of English and grammar, neither of which you have. Additionally, not everyone is fit to be a Helper/Staff/whatever, the job's not for everyone.
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how do i not have a common understanding for English or grammar i speak fluent english. english is my primary language
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You miss tons of capitals...
'grate'
this is your 3 application? If I would write it it would be my 3th.
"i am very nice to people unless they bother me." -> That is sooooo wrong, you should ALWAYS be nice to people.
'you're business' -> your* business
"the four" -> the fourth*
"i know that i would make a good helper" -> I am sure I would be a good helper.*
"out of you're day" -> your*
I am sure I missed more mistakes, but since I am Dutch, English really being my thirth language, I found you silly.
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If you speak fluent english like you said, you must be able at least maybe have a better grammar in general. Maybe, it was not your day, maybe you were tired I don't know. And I'm going to point another point, why this instant so many players want to apply for this rank?
Any explication??
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Explanation*
"You must be able at least maybe have a better grammar in general" -----> In general, you must, at least, be able to maybe use better grammar .
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hadi srsly
if your telling me to use better grammar maybe because english ain't my primary language and my primary language is French so don't judge :P
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Since your language is Dutch RedArrow and English isn't your first language i'm not sure if your were making a joke or not. If it wasn't I thought i might let you know that its 3rd and third, not 3th and thirth. Otherwise the post was concise and to the point. I find it impressive that you know three languages and thought i'd help ya out!
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