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blubber230 for helper
« on: February 08, 2014, 05:22:34 pm »
this is the 3 application I have posted because i think that i would make a grate helper because i stop problems or tell a staff member about it so that we can fix the problem.

i also think that i would make a good helper because i am very nice to people unless they bother me.

reason three i don't use foul language for any reason at all because i think its wrong to use foul language unless you need to for some apparent reason that's you're business 

the four and final reason i think would make a great helper is because anyone that needs help i would gladly  help on short notice even if i am busy doing something for myself i will stop and do something that is requested by another person

and i hope that this is enough for you guys to understand that i would like to be  a helper and i know that i would make a good helper and thanks for taking time out of you're day for reading this application

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Re: blubber230 for helper
« Reply #1 on: February 08, 2014, 06:45:43 pm »


It always helps to have  a common understanding of English and grammar, neither of which you have. Additionally, not everyone is fit to be a Helper/Staff/whatever, the job's not for everyone.

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« Reply #2 on: February 09, 2014, 04:07:00 pm »
how do i not have a common understanding for English or grammar i speak fluent english. english is my primary language 

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« Reply #3 on: February 09, 2014, 09:20:56 pm »
You miss tons of capitals...

'grate'

this is your 3 application? If I would write it it would be my 3th.

"i am very nice to people unless they bother me." -> That is sooooo wrong, you should ALWAYS be nice to people.

'you're business' -> your* business

"the four" -> the fourth*

"i know that i would make a good helper" -> I am sure I would be a good helper.*

"out of you're day" -> your*

I am sure I missed more mistakes, but since I am Dutch, English really being my thirth language, I found you silly.
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« Reply #4 on: February 10, 2014, 01:28:56 am »
If you speak fluent english like you said, you must be able at least maybe have a better grammar in general. Maybe, it was not your day, maybe you were tired I don't know. And I'm going to point another point, why this instant so many players want to apply for this rank?

Any explication??

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Re: blubber230 for helper
« Reply #5 on: February 10, 2014, 01:33:56 am »
Explanation*

"You must be able at least maybe have a better grammar in general" -----> In general, you must, at least, be able to maybe use better grammar .
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Re: blubber230 for helper
« Reply #6 on: February 10, 2014, 02:44:46 am »
hadi srsly

if your telling me to use better grammar maybe because english ain't my primary language and my primary language is French so don't judge :P

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« Reply #7 on: February 20, 2014, 07:39:23 am »
Since your language is Dutch RedArrow and English isn't your first language i'm not sure if your were making a joke or not. If it wasn't I thought i might let you know that its 3rd and third, not 3th and thirth. Otherwise the post was concise and to the point. I find it impressive that you know three languages and thought i'd help ya out!

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« Reply #8 on: February 21, 2014, 11:17:09 am »
You busted me... I learn from the bad...
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