You miss tons of capitals...
'grate'
this is your 3 application? If I would write it it would be my 3th.
"i am very nice to people unless they bother me." -> That is sooooo wrong, you should ALWAYS be nice to people.
'you're business' -> your* business
"the four" -> the fourth*
"i know that i would make a good helper" -> I am sure I would be a good helper.*
"out of you're day" -> your*
I am sure I missed more mistakes, but since I am Dutch, English really being my thirth language, I found you silly.