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The slideshow intro was boring. Most people will have stopped watching once the video portion started. Your frame-rate while recording could have been better, as could have been the quality. The music was nice, but didn't quite fit the content of the video. The second half was also bland. Just flying around doing random stuff isn't really a "trailer". Overall rating: 2.5/5
/rant
On a side note, feel free to use the "Video" section of the forum, it's there for a reason. Also, just wondering, how old are you Ron?